Monday, March 22, 2010

I wiLL finD yoU

Sorry I haven't been posting any poems lately, I've become over-critical, but I hope I can get some constructive criticism from you guys! I'll be posting often in the the month of April, or the NaPoWriMo month!

Here's a poem I wrote on 3/12/10!

I Will Find You

You have run away
expecting me to
catch (find) you
And I will.
I will follow you
until the sun
the starry midnight
Until the moon
and sun slumber
Until the stars
dance on the clouds
Until I reach
the edge of Earth
I'll never stop
looking for you
I will find you.

This is one of my favorites that I wrote. My main inspirations come from:
  • the sun
  • the moon
  • the stars
  • the sky
  • the earth
Basic stuff :D So, hope you like it!


Celtic Traveler said...

Don't worry about a thing because this the most beatiful poem I've ever read!
There's no good MODERN poets. I think you're gonna change all that;)

Rose Cunningham said...

I agree with Celtic Traveler- your writing will make a difference in this world.

And the poem is magnificent! (definitely a runner up behind that one about the seed becoming a forest)
I really like the moon and stars and sun and sky and earth, but I haven't really worked on writing about them...I think I should.
I really like that the poem can have so many meanings. I think it oculd be about a lost love. What was your thinking? Again, I really liked it!

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Single Winged Butterfly said...

I love it I really do.

Tiff said...

hey kirthi!
love your poem!
you should use metaphors, similes, and more figurative language.
just a thought...

p.s. research TPCASTT.