Here's a poem I wrote on 3/12/10!
I Will Find You
You have run away
expecting me to
catch (find) you
And I will.
I will follow you
until the sun
illuminates
the starry midnight
sky
Until the moon
and sun slumber
together
Until the stars
dance on the clouds
Until I reach
the edge of Earth
I'll never stop
looking for you
I will find you.
This is one of my favorites that I wrote. My main inspirations come from:
- the sun
- the moon
- the stars
- the sky
- the earth
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Don't worry about a thing because this the most beatiful poem I've ever read!
Honestly!
There's no good MODERN poets. I think you're gonna change all that;)
I agree with Celtic Traveler- your writing will make a difference in this world.
And the poem is magnificent! (definitely a runner up behind that one about the seed becoming a forest)
I really like the moon and stars and sun and sky and earth, but I haven't really worked on writing about them...I think I should.
I really like that the poem can have so many meanings. I think it oculd be about a lost love. What was your thinking? Again, I really liked it!
I love it I really do.
hey kirthi!
love your poem!
you should use metaphors, similes, and more figurative language.
just a thought...
XD
p.s. research TPCASTT.
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